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Drowned and Forlorn

Contributed by kyletycz on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 06:26:04 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Forlorn, forsaken
Lost at sea
Alone, neglected
needing apathy

Im forlorn
Im forgotten
Im bitter
Im rotten

I search
And I try
To find something
That I cant find

I want acceptance
I want to be thought of
I want to be remembered
So I go for the bottle

I want this to end
End all the sorrow
There is temporary relief
At the bottom of a bottle

Drink away the pain
Drown out the sorrow
Drink more tonight
So I can get through tomarow

The alcohol helps
To ease the pain
It helps it a bit
And that is my claim

Please will you help
Will you ease my pain
I dont want to go back
To the bottle again

Am I even here
I cant seem to stand,
Your constant neglect
Or on two feet as planned

Please make me feel
Like Im somewhat sacred
So I dont have to resort
To the bottle so tainted

Show me Im important
Show me you care
I want you to talk
When Im standing right there

I want you to know this
Please will you understand
Everything is made to be broken
......... I just want you to know who I am

P.S. : Im not an alcoholic

Copyright © kyletycz ... [ 2005-04-09 06:26:04]
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Re: Drowned and Forlorn (User Rating: 1 )
by Azanna on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 06:25:54 PM AEST
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I really like this piece.

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