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End
Contributed by
scott23432
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Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The end is near. The bottle is empty and I feel dizzy. I ponder life and why I lived at all, why I was put here in the first place. To the floor I fall. The people I love, spinning in my head. The ones that were my hearts desire, spiral deep in to my heart. My vision blurs. The world shows it’s self as a cruel and bad place. The thoughts are incoherent. I know this is right. This is the only way, to get away from it all. This is my one hope. My eyes fade to black. Just before my breath stops and my heart rests, I know it was a mistake.
End.
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2002-12-22 01:20:00]
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Re: End
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by alternachik29 on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 07:08:00 PM AEST
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hey, i likey. i think i've read it before, though. good job.
later, alternachik 29
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Re: End
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by hardcoreputa on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:04:57 PM AEST
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| its a great poem... the last line where u say it was a mistake disterbed me... there are many people who dont relize that they dont want to die until it is the end. anyways... suicidal thoughts and attempts are normal to me... but this poem made me think of all the people who dont full think it through until it is too late.. well thanx for sharing. |
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