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Warped And Twisted
Contributed by
FadedDestiny323
on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 03:57:13 AM in AEST
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So many tricks & so many lies
Too many whens & too many whys
Nobodys special, nobodys gifted
Im just me, warped & twisted
Sleeping awake & choking on a dream
Listening loudly to a silent scream
Call my mind, the numbers unlisted
Lost in someone so warped & twisted
On my knees, alive but dead
Look at the invisible blood Ive bled
Im not gone, my mind has drifted
Dont expect much, Im warped & twisted
Burnt out, wasted, empty, & hollow
Todays just yesterday's tomorrow
The sun died out, the ashes sifted
Im still here, warped & twisted
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FadedDestiny323
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2005-04-09 03:57:13]
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Re: Warped And Twisted
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by Spike on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 06:57:45 AM AEST
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I liked the metre, definitly a lyrical quality to it. Strong sentiment, and a poem that gets more intriguing with each read.
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Re: Warped And Twisted
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by broken_hearted_loser on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 02:59:21 PM AEST
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| dude . i've heard that poem before . my friend did it for this poetry recital . dude . not cool . STEEEEEALLLEEEEER . hah . what a fake ! |
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