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The Last Touch
Contributed by
mannyrich
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Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:41:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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In the darkness full of rains,
time is telling me to go in
To reside there for good
but my heart is not in the coffin.
In the world of love,hope could stay
for hours with love could draw felicity
with the color of heart all I could see
as in my dreams with my young lady.
Thanks, for all the happiness;
Thanks, for smiles that are sweet:
But before my life will be cut...
can you let me first touch your heart?
Copyright ©
mannyrich
... [
2005-04-08 23:41:04]
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Re: The Last Touch
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by MMISS on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 12:17:08 AM AEST
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| WOW THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL! YOU ARE SUCH A ROMANTIC. IT WAS VERY SWEET. |
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Re: The Last Touch
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 12:31:22 AM AEST
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Very sweet, a bit sad but awesome.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Last Touch
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 05:49:33 AM AEST
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| another good write that I enjoyed reading. I look forward to more like this. it is a sad poem but it really touches me to read about love like this. I miss when I had a love that felt this strong. take care....Steve |
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