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Leave Me
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:01:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Leave me
Just run away
Abandon me
Just go astray
Walk past me now
Dont look into my eyes
Dont ask me if I'm okie
Dont ask why I cry
Cause I know, yes
Ive found your lies
You don't give a damn
So just say good-bye
Leave me
Just run away
Abandon me
Just go astray
Get out
Just go now
Get out
I dont care how
Copyright ©
Daniels_Princess
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2005-04-08 23:01:43]
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Re: Leave Me
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by badgurlinoz on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:16:23 PM AEST
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interesting write . Can feel the emotion in this piece .
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Re: Leave Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:33:03 PM AEST
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well written. love the raw emotion...very nicely written.
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Re: Leave Me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 12:16:08 AM AEST
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Very sad but great writing.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Leave Me
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 07:46:11 PM AEST
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Firstly I am literally taken by your poem. Yes, it was angry but it was also insightful.
It is like saying, "I can love you this much and no more and should you think otherwise then my defenses go up and you must go, because I know that you will inevitably."
This could also be lyrics.
Did I mention that I really liked the expressive feel of this poem? Well I did, truly.
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