|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Gone
Contributed by
AngryBunny
on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
I try to hide
Running from my life
Inside my mind
Memories that choose to stay
Too much at stake
What have I made?
I just wanted to scream
But no one was there
To listen to my pain
So I buried the anguish
Inside of me
And now it's back
Crawling inside
Wanting to be free
So who were they?
That did this to me
Who made me insane
I trusted them
More than anyone else
But they didn't stay for me
And now I feel more naked than before
The pain inside is taking over me
A cool breeze inside my mind
Like someone has opened my door
I feel more empty now
Things I thought were mine to keep
Gone
Copyright ©
AngryBunny
... [
2002-12-22 00:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:29:12 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hi Bunny,
Very good write altho sad. I can relate to these feelings.
Hang tough! You can make it thru.
PEACE, LUV, JOY, HEALING,
emy |
|
|
Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:29:18 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hi Bunny,
Very good write altho sad. I can relate to these feelings.
Hang tough! You can make it thru.
PEACE, LUV, JOY, HEALING,
emy |
|
|
Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:29:22 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hi Bunny,
Very good write altho sad. I can relate to these feelings.
Hang tough! You can make it thru.
PEACE, LUV, JOY, HEALING,
emy |
|
|
Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 02:42:22 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is a very sad poem....Things i thought were mine to keep ....Gone....that's a very strong line and message in this poem....thanks for sharing it i hope your pain lifts from you...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
|
|
Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 05:45:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| touching and warming upon a soul that knows the feeling only too well at times.. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
