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Free At Last
Contributed by
Whisper
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Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 09:00:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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There she stood looking down
The bridge was empty and cold
Her breath hung in clouds
Round her head
And She cared not
Just one little slip
That's all It will take
No one would miss her
Hell
No One would even know
She will just slip into the water
and go to sleep
To awake ,
she thinks,
In A better place
Far away
If someone was just there
Soon enough
Things would be different
Their shouts of..
Come down from that Bridge ledge
You damn fool
Think Of what you could have done
If only you'd waited
But she hears them Not
As she closes her eyes
She simply steps away
Leaving us behind to Think
That errie thought
Its Too Late
She 's Free At Last
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2005-04-08 21:00:57]
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Re: Free At Last
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by Cupid on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 09:38:21 PM AEST
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I like the name you chose. Whisper is such a pretty name.
Anyroad, I've written poems like this. You did a wonderful job.
I hope you aren't thinking of hurting yourself. I'd be sad. ; _ ;
And the world would be deprived of your WONDERFUL poetry.
Keep up the good work, Whisper.
And remember, ‘whatever is true, whatever is honorable, whatever is just, whatever is pure, whatever is lovely, whatever is gracious, if there is any excellence, if there is anything worthy of praise, think about these things.’-Holy Bible, Philippians 4:8 |
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Re: Free At Last
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by Apolla on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 10:36:17 PM AEST
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| I love this poem so much. I agree that whisper is a beautiful name and it fits perfectly in this instance. I hope you keep writing beautiful poetry like this. You can count me as one of your fans. |
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Re: Free At Last
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by pixie on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 01:19:15 PM AEST
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amazing poem, really loved this
pix xx |
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Re: Free At Last
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by brew on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:24:47 PM AEST
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Love the poet name.......differ.and deep. Nice write as well........its deep and dark, yet, heard and known. Good write.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Free At Last
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:58:32 AM AEST
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Whisper
Sad and wonderful write
Sinned |
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Re: Free At Last
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by Lin54 on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 02:20:57 PM AEST
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The cries that no one hears... Soooo sad! We need to listen with our hearts--not just our ears.
Good poem--great insight!
Linda |
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