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The Soft Spring
Contributed by
Sirena
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Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 06:45:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The Soft Spring
by Sirena
I see leaves of silver-green
of old greek lore.
I see golden daffodils
for who's gentle lovers are for.
I see cloud of mist
against a sky of light blue.
I see grey doves
who's mates they are true.
Sun touching like a kiss upon my face,
Tender yound ferns which remind of lace.
Spring has come, aroused from its soft sleep,
too jump and play till summer comes to greet.
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Sirena
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2005-04-08 18:45:46]
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Re: The Soft Spring
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by Dying_Angel on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 06:53:05 PM AEST
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| aw its so pretty! v. different but still better :) jenxx |
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Re: The Soft Spring
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 07:58:51 PM AEST
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| this is gorgeous. The image you put in the readers mind is lovely and so complete. Very nice job. |
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Re: The Soft Spring
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by Dralion on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:40:18 PM AEST
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| Always wonderful how weather and seasons can inspire feelings and emotions. |
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Re: The Soft Spring
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by Sirena on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:54:12 PM AEST
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| Thank you everyone for your comments! Just a little spelling error I did *slaps self on head* the, " I see cloud of mist," is suppost to be "clouds of mist" sorry -Anne (writer of poem) |
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