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confusion and Love
Contributed by
GurlyTye
on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 06:18:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My head is spinning
I'm so confused
I love you so much
and you seen so amused
Do you think it's funny?
These games that you play
the mixed signals
the loving things you say
Never a final decision
always jumping around
You pick up my heart
and smash it to the ground
You tell me you love me
Then you tell her the same
but who is it true to?
I'm so sick of this game
I try so hard to hate you
To let go of what we had
to push you from my heart
to put us in the past
But letting go
seem so far out of reach
but i will do it
i dont need your heart to keep.
Copyright ©
GurlyTye
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2005-04-08 18:18:29]
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Re: confusion and Love
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:03:24 PM AEST
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A sad, but very well written piece of poetry.
I loved the flow and the way it's presented. Well done
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: confusion and Love
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by Mesano on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:20:20 PM AEST
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wonderfully written, but yes it is sad :( things will work itself out and theres a someone out there for everyone
-Nicki |
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Re: confusion and Love
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by sick_n_twisted on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:36:13 PM AEST
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hey,nice poem im sorry...but its sweet...this is
something i couldnt relate too nice write |
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Re: confusion and Love
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by Cupid on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 09:27:24 PM AEST
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Yeah, men can be jerks sometimes.
But not to worry, my friend.
Things will turn out right in the end.
: )
Keep up the good work, GurlyTye! |
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Re: confusion and Love
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 12:02:22 PM AEST
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This is sad... You don't need a guy like that, no one does.
I really hate games.. lol.
I can relate to this, I know many people have been there.
I hope it works out for you,
Great write,
*hugs* Phil |
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Re: confusion and Love
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 04:05:52 AM AEST
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Ya know Tye,
Not all guys are like this ... some actually grow out of it ...
Nazmythian ~ |
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