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Fight to lose
Contributed by
dagonet
on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 05:35:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Everyday my eyes open and I see the same vision,
A fair angel floats my imagination as a welcome division.
Distracting me from the illusions of my cursed life,
But the morning soon brightens and again your illusion leaves me to the strife,
As I face the day ahead with only a lingering thought of you,
But that is enough for me; mere shadows of memories with you still get me through,
Memories of you are wonderful, but still I desire to ask for more,
Your spirit has captured my heart, for my feelings for you are now my core,
What you see of me I wish I could change, the things you dislike I wish I could hide,
If only you could see and understand the feelings for you I have deep inside,
Why don’t you feel anything for me? Am I tainted in some way? Am I just too low?
Am I wrong in some way? Have I done something wrong? Or is it your own emotions that need the time to grow??
Is it worth me waiting for you? Shall I give you the time and space?
I will willingly do those things if there is a chance our futures will interlace,
I care for you so greatly, love burns in my constrictive heart, and my feelings hurt so much,
I long to be in your arms, I long to be in your presence, but I live for your gentle touch,
I have fallen for you so deeply, plain and simply, no lies, I think that I am in love,
You are my angel, blissful, beautiful, and graceful like the wings of the purest white dove,
I am none of these things to you, your feelings for me; you would feel for a tender bruise,
For your love or even mere approval I will keep fighting….
…Even though I still fight to lose.
Copyright ©
dagonet
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2005-04-08 17:35:36]
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Re: Fight to lose
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by sick_n_twisted on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:21:39 PM AEST
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| hey,nice write...Im sorry about ur girlfriend...I wish that wasnt the way is was...but I really like ur poem...thanks for reading my comment c ya i hope you find another love love will be with you no matter what it will find you if you dont find it first... |
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Re: Fight to lose
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by jjones12 on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:39:53 PM AEST
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ya it's fresteraiting sometimes.samething happend to me, my boyfirend ended up moving though. oh and he cheated on me so ya ummmm..... great write
=Jen= |
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Re: Fight to lose
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:04:58 PM AEST
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| worry for wut happened. but it was a good write/! |
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