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Advice

Contributed by dreamer_for_eternity on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 04:28:53 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Seems everybody in this world
Has their battles to fight
And as you go everyday
It gets harder to survive

Because this world will push
More problems onto you
Just as you
got rid of the last few

The one piece of advice
I find myself giving
"Keep ya head up"
Ya gotta keep living

Telling others
to keep their heads up
Really is not a solution
Doesn't solve much

But I still say it
While I know it doesn't help
But at least it shows I care
I use it for myself

And while I go on in
This battle of life
Just trying to
Live it all right

I understand
that I gotta keep faith
Something to believe in
While the end we await

Because if you don't keep faith
You'll grow old to be empty
And you'll give in to everything
Becuase it all seems just so tempting

And to know that heaven
Is right above
Fills me with joy
Allows me to love

It gives me a reason
To keep my head up
That's the only time
My advice amounts to much

Copyright © dreamer_for_eternity ... [ 2005-04-08 16:28:53]
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Re: Advice (User Rating: 1 )
by Azanna on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:31:34 AM AEST
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I like this a lot. =)

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