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Scrum
Contributed by
duck
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Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 04:15:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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it tires...
frustration begets a tear,
the pain befriended year after year,
the endless beggar my neighbour ideal drains.
anguish, confusion, pounding, tension,
pushed aside by greed, and hunger, and desires.
i await breaking point,
to achieve a state of rest...
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duck
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2005-04-08 16:15:29]
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Re: Scrum
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by Whisper on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:13:34 PM AEST
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Well that's a interesting write. Good choice of emotion words. I trust that you took a tylenal and that thought went away , LOL
Good write. I enjoyed it
Whisper
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Re: Scrum
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:53:16 PM AEST
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| very good write |
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