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Fire
Contributed by
bookworm484
on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 03:57:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She sits alone,
in this big bad world.
She faces her fears,
never shedding tears.
Quite in the corner,
a place no one looks.
The one who dreams,
but it’s not what it seems.
For what appears to be a dieing light,
is a star waiting to shine.
When she comes into sight,
she’ll stun them with her might.
But in the shadows she still lurks,
never to blaze.
Because those who thought they were higher,
extinguished her fire.
Copyright ©
bookworm484
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2005-04-08 15:57:51]
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Re: Fire
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 04:33:52 PM AEST
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Aside from a few spelling errors, this is well put. Don't stop writing (or reading).
Take care.
Andrew |
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Re: Fire
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by BeHappy on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 06:32:39 PM AEST
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| I agree with Andrew, Great Job Doyley! You are so talented, i wish i was as good as you... |
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