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who's crying now,,,
Contributed by
spooky
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Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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you put so much time on makeing things happen,,
but you don't know much a person can take,,
he feels worthless,he'll always feel second,,
he doesn't know where he stands, and doesn't realy care,,
he puts his heart on the line, for a love he'd hopes for a lifetime,,
his mistake,,he was the fool, who fell in love,,
" who fell in love,, who's sorry,,
who's hurt,,he is ,,because he cared,,
everyone has someone,,he has dreams,,
they have love to share,, he has forever,,
who's crying now?,, he is because he cared,,
he knows that it won't happen again,,,,
" the promise from ones heart,,
no keys,,no locks,,no walls,,
Will be around the heart,,
because it won't be around to be hurt,,
who's crying now?,,
when he's gone for good,,
who's crying now,,
he isn't,,for he's not here to be hurt anymore,,
So who's crying now?,,,
he always loved you,,
you say you cared ,,but didn't,,
who's crying now ,,you,,,,
craig s. meeks
Copyright ©
spooky
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2002-12-21 23:20:00]
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Re: who's crying now,,,
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by emystar on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 11:53:36 PM AEST
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Hi Craig,
This is a good write and I certainly know the feeling.
PEACE, LUV, JOY,
emy |
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Re: who's crying now,,,
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by tollo on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 01:14:31 AM AEST
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"sorry but i dont get this pome very much, but the part i did it was nice. or maybe i didnt understand it because i had to get off the net fast, because i shouldnt be on. see ya"
tollo*_*&^_* |
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Re: who's crying now,,,
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:22:56 PM AEST
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| very good i know the feeling keep them coming |
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Re: who's crying now,,,
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by OreO on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 02:32:19 PM AEST
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Oh this is beautiful....it's so sad it brought tears to my eyes, i can relate to this one sooo much, i know what it feels like to give all of my heart to someone like this and then later find out they didnt really care.....it's very painfully sad....thanks for sharing this one craig i enjoyed reading t his one as i do all your poetry that touches me so deeply....keep letting your talent shine through your heart my friend...
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