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As Death Whispers
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 12:37:17 PM in AEST
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As death whispers I listen,
I look over & see his knife glisten,
It draws me in as it promises death,
To rid me of my final breath.
I hear it everywhere that I go,
It crawls across my skin so slow,
Tempting me to be its victim,
Telling me that my demise will be grim.
I try to block it out of my head,
If I listen I know I’ll end up dead,
At night I lay frozen by fear,
As I am waiting for him to come near.
Breathing loudly into my soul,
Leaving me feeling the dead & icy cold,
He makes me want him with his touch,
He will never release me from his clutch.
I can hear his whispers even as I write,
I mustn’t give in to his evil plight,
He’ll break me in two & snap my sanity,
Infecting me with all his profanity.
I have become engulfed by his dark charm,
I know to me he will only cause harm,
But it’s hard to ignore as he begs & pleads,
& how he longs to make my soul bleed.
Copyright ©
pixie
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 12:42:40 PM AEST
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| Very good poem, nice and creepy. SLipSix. |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 12:43:55 PM AEST
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| good write reminds me of a book i read i like it |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:21:20 PM AEST
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Deliciusly morbid, beautifully woven with ebony seams, flowing gracefully on cool winds... I hear your cries, cheri.. Do not succumb to death's melodies...however tempting and enchanting they are. It pains my heart to see a good friend be burdened with such pain and sorrow... You do not deserve this. All my love and comfort, cheri pixie. Exquisite piece of poetry, as are all of your gorgeous poems. Flawless till the very end. I'm just a PM away whenever you need someone to talk to! =) Je t'aime, ma douce amie. Forever,
Your friend and fan,
Stephy! *hugs and love* |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:55:47 PM AEST
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This is really dark..... not my type of poetry but so well written, as always....
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:57:44 PM AEST
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Slips in ... Turns up Billy Idol on the stereo ... really loud ... Try and listen to him now Pixie !!!
Nazzy ~
( another skillfully crafted poem Dear ) |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by jyssvw22 on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 04:16:51 PM AEST
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| nice write, i got chills, - keep it up! |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 05:20:05 PM AEST
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I like this Krissie.
(lol @ Nazzy's comment)
It is kinda morbid, but you do dark poems really really well.
This is fantastic write sweetie.
*hugs tons* Phil xxx |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by sick_n_twisted on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 05:42:01 PM AEST
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| I love it...this is one of the best poems about death i've heard I like all the rhymes they're really good and the flow is awsome it just has a good flow all the way through nice write! later' |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by Whisper on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:22:09 PM AEST
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Pixie That is a Excellent write. So beautifully expressed. What fear you hide if your plight is as that innocent girl or boy sees it. Its a good write but its sad coz somewhere our brothers and families really are feeling that Death is whispering begging them near.
Peace
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 09:42:36 PM AEST
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| you never cease to top your posts or amaze. and a writer cannot ask for anything more. |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by inoc on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 08:27:21 AM AEST
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*hiding behind a pillow typing!*...
Even though I personally prefer happy, religious, inspiring poems I always find your dark poems so cleverly written ....
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*I feel better knowing it is written as a fiction, as I get easily scared! *
~cheers!`
I |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 08:58:24 AM AEST
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Yes this is very efective and chilling
" SNAP MY SANITY " ouch! realy got
engrossed reading this pix, **********
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by Justingunshin on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 02:38:46 PM AEST
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| I really like the poem, it goes in, and it is very detailed. |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:56:27 AM AEST
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Wow pixie girl this write is awsome.
You seem to amaze me everytime i read your poems. |
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Re: As Death Whispers
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:54:19 AM AEST
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your poems are really good. I love poems about blood and death and stuff like that and this is very excellant. Great job
christina |
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