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Lover's Moon
Contributed by
reflections
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Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 09:10:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It was the brightest, clearest moon
that I had ever seen;
a silver crescent crown of light
for the night’s celestial queen.
The beauty viewed from Earth below
was soothing to the eye
of all whose gaze was cast toward
the Earth’s bright moon-lit sky.
Maybe, in their fantasy,
God’s canvas up above
took the shape of oceans,
with their churning froth of love.
Perhaps its vivid glow caressed
the foamy puffs of white
that ships sail on in turbulence,
on heaven’s sea of night.
The enchantment of the evening
with its moon and stars so bright
was a lover’s tale repeated,
since the first of mankind’s nights.
Still … lovers made their promises,
of commitments ‘till they die;
while the moon-bright night embraced them
with its magic from on high.
It WAS the brightest, clearest moon
that I had ever seen…
on the night of my marriage proposal
to my little high-school queen!
John F. Templin ©
Copyright ©
reflections
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2005-04-08 09:10:14]
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Re: Lover's Moon
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by Kie on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 10:42:46 AM AEST
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A perfect title.
It is obvious that you bask in and cherish what you have. That in itself is a blessing.
May forever be always for you both.
Wonderful poem.
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Re: Lover's Moon
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by sweetoccasion29 on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:11:49 AM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL!!!! |
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Re: Lover's Moon
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 02:44:01 PM AEST
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Oh John...what an enchanting poem!!
So beautiful and dreamy.. Loved this..and I'm sure she loves it too..
Jenni |
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Re: Lover's Moon
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:24:23 AM AEST
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So beautifull, romantic, heavenly beautifull write.
I don't need to tell u that u both are lucky to have each other.
Magical beauty in this write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Lover's Moon
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 07:37:12 AM AEST
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wow John this is absolutely sensational. You're a truly talented poet whose radiance shines through his work. Your work is outstanding. This was a pleasant and delightful write. A real heart warming poem.
Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with us.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: Lover's Moon
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by brew on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 05:34:12 PM AEST
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How beautiful..........What a nite I bet that was.....!! Nice, romantic, write.
Brew~ |
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