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My picture
Contributed by
miss_blond_85
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Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 07:01:27 AM in AEST
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I'm going to paint a picture
I'll paint it with a twist
My paint brush is a razor blade
My canvas is my wrist
Such a pretty little picture
A red line to begin
Let's add a couple more & then
The razor starts to win
Trails of anger overflowing
Lose my focus more & more
From all the tears I couldn't cry
Now I lay silent on the floor
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miss_blond_85
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2005-04-08 07:01:27]
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Re: My picture
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 12:08:19 PM AEST
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i like the flow of this poem, and i love the writings and what its about, but i feel like this poem just ended ubruply, good write and keep doing it.
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Re: My picture
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by BEBE on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:00:14 PM AEST
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good write
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