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DARKNESS
Contributed by
hellsfallenangel
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Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:38:50 PM in AEST
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All i see is darkness which is fine with me.
Ive lived in in darkness all my life darkness is all i know. The light burns my eyes.
I love the dark its who i am. The darkness is always surronding me never to see light again.
So **** the light Im living in the darkness
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hellsfallenangel
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Re: DARKNESS
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by Sinned on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 07:09:28 AM AEST
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Before anything
Nothing
A dark void
Then His Voice
From total darkness came light
Life
That all might see
For I AM ME
Your poem could have flowed better,but still a good read.
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Re: DARKNESS
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by moon_light on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 07:44:19 PM AEST
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trust me demon you had light and you will agein. see you in class tomorrow.
love jen
ps. don't worry about the hit lists. werer alll gona be safe. |
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Re: DARKNESS
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 10:11:23 AM AEST
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I think we all feel this way at one time or another. Darkness is comfort. Good write. Peace to ya.
Thumper ; o)
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Re: DARKNESS
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:28:44 PM AEST
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its good. keep writin'
armybrat aka aubrey |
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Re: DARKNESS
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by justme03 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:09:46 AM AEST
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i can relate. . .
i hate the light
ya kno a good poem is something ppl can read and b liek wow i relate to that and they can see they are not alone
thats why i liek your poems
i think im gonna read them all right now!
luv, Kortnie |
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