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My Final Bow
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:34:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Endless paths,
Plain white walls.
The ceiling crumbles,
And the floor falls.
The lights shine dim,
The pain lingers on.
Im so very weak,
I can no longer be strong.
The candle flickers,
The faith disappears.
My soul departs,
Over run by fears.
My breathing slows,
I begin to cry.
My hearts beats gone,
I know I must die.
I fought so hard for this moment,
Im finally at rest.
I know in my grave,
Is when im my best.
Few will cry,
Few wil care.
Most wont notice,
If im not there.
I go to sleep this final time,
Wake I wont tomorrow.
Let me be strong for once,
I promise, you wont feel sorrow.
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Pats4eva7
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2005-04-07 17:34:22]
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Re: My Final Bow
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 06:31:33 PM AEST
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| great job, very sad, i hope this isnt how u really feel....hang in there |
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Re: My Final Bow
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 09:52:10 PM AEST
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Though sad in content, this is a very good
write. The rhythm flows nicely, and the mood
is well established, intentionally or not. I wish
you the best, and I really hope there are
people who care, whether you realize it or not.
Keep your chin up. |
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