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Insanity
Contributed by
GurlyTye
on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:42:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A tear drop falls,
someones heart breaks.
Can you hear it?
Never knowing how another truly feels.
Falling into a deep
insanity.
Always trying
Never finished.
Love, Hate
Passion behind it all.
A starving soul screams
Hurt.
Broken.
Fix it, fix it
How?
Never finished
always trying.
The tear drop hits the floor,
ad like a sick cycle
the heart breaks.
Deeper and deeper.
Dark, pitch black
Insanity
Copyright ©
GurlyTye
... [
2005-04-07 15:42:00]
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Re: Insanity
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 04:47:02 PM AEST
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A good entry post. Welcome to YPDC !!!! I know you'll learn to love it here ... many a good poet and friend reside here ... I look forward to reading more !!!
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Re: Insanity
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:43:54 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC :D
I hope you love it here.
Great write, I love your words and how they seem to fit together so well.
A tear drop falls,
someones heart breaks.
Can you hear it?
I love that.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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