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Just a pretty face
Contributed by
loopylou
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Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:16:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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the door swang so hard i thought it would fall of its hinges
and you flew like a freed bird
and you can walk, run or fly away
in your effortless grace
because this time i stamp my feet on the floor
so hard the walls shake
and i use my energy to change this hurt to hate
lost in these walls
felt by these vibrations
these temptations
I almost hate them
This house can fall down
and crumble to the floor
it's where i use to stay
but i've risen above it all
so you can slam the door
but i'm going to lock it
i'm away from you
a diffrent place
a diffrent level
lost in blue
so you can keep your green
and i'll breath fresh air
whilst you look for weed
and your eyes are beutiful
brown yellow and green
dont think im not captivated
dont think i havent seen
but when they look away
when they stray
i realise your just a pretty face
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Re: Just a pretty face
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by fixed on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 04:06:29 PM AEST
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| Wow, thats actually helped me look at someone differently. thank you |
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Re: Just a pretty face
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:45:16 PM AEST
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| That was a great poem. I understood the feeling in it... It could rhymn a little better, but i could feel the flow of it. Keep it up. Jenny |
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