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Horizon
Contributed by
blue_angel
on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:46:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears pour from these blood shot eyes
My heart aching from the piercing knife
My pain rising within myself
My soul heavy from this burdened life
Cold and dark is my grief never-ending
Concealed are my many sorrows
My intuition forever in exile
My screams weak and voice hollow
Looking into the mirror again
I shatter the reflection I see
Realizing through my disarray
I can’t even recognize me
Trying to escape my banishment so vile
My bruised knees I am weeping
Murderous is this curse so cruel
From my wrists I see the blood seeping
I look up into the starry night sky
Searching for some kind of revival
The moon disappearing, the sky awakens
Praying for my survival
Opening my eyes for what seems the first time
Crying away all that I’ve done
And now I’m finally feeling free
Running blindly into the horizon
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Re: Horizon
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:45:19 PM AEST (User
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Very well done but I found a little sad! It sounds like you are depressed in this,Your true feelings really came out. I hope youre ok now. Christina |
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Re: Horizon
(User Rating: 1 ) by SylviaWalters on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 03:25:22 AM AEST (User
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I really like this poem, because it is quite easy to relate to it. Well done, and I truely hope things get better soon. |
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Re: Horizon
(User Rating: 1 ) by maestar on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:33:09 AM AEST (User
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Great poem.
loved it.
you've got a real talent |
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