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I waited for you
Contributed by
Drowning_Dreams
on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:41:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I waited,
Wondering where you were.
There I was,
standing in the darkened corner.
I waited,
All the while wishing.
Wishing I could hold you once more.
Longing for the love you once showed me.
I waited,
here I sit.
Never knowing your love.
I long for your heart.
I waited,
I will wait longer.
For as long as you wish,
As long as you truly care for me.
I waited,
I cannot forget you.
You are always in my mind,
Though you are not always with me.
I love you...
Therefore I wait.
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Drowning_Dreams
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2005-04-07 10:41:48]
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Re: I waited for you
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by alexb on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:48:38 AM AEST
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| this is one of those poems where the subject can be written about a thousand times but it always makes me sad when I read it. great write. |
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Re: I waited for you
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by pixie on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 01:55:28 PM AEST
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sad and emotional, well expressed
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Re: I waited for you
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by B-Randy on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 01:10:29 PM AEST
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| Probably my favorite of all of your poems, I've had that feeling before. It's hard to stop looking over your shoulders, thinking that they will be their for you, when deep down inside you know it isn't so. I hope you waitings not in vain. |
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Re: I waited for you
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:06:30 PM AEST
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Ah waiting.. I could likely write forever on this one. I believe we all feel a kinship to this one.
But waiting takes its toll and the mind has a way of moving memories around like forgotten chess pieces.
I felt immersed when reading this poem. It was very realistic and the images easily subjected in my mind.
This was my favorite "I waited,
I cannot forget you.
You are always in my mind,
Though you are not always with me"
Kie |
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