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On a quest to find love...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 08:20:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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A soul ridden with the temptations of hate
A life over run by fear and spate
She settles her heart uneasily to rest
In her dream she fore goes on a quest
She enters salvation and its terms of heed
Her heart devoured of lust and greed
For an instance love tumbles her way
Arousing feelings never been portrayed
She nestles herself deep into the dream
As tears waltz down like a flowing stream
For here in her dreams she's safe from
people's sins
Unable to feel the battered emotions
Bruised deep and well beyond her skin
For once she awakens from her dreaming
charade
Back to reality her heart shall again parade
She mournfully awaits darkness to once again fall
So she can begin her quest for love's call
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2005-04-07 08:20:18]
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Re: On a quest to find love...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 09:44:16 AM AEST
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Sue,
Great write i could really identify
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Re: On a quest to find love...
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by pixie on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 01:56:14 PM AEST
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wow Sue that was a deep write and so well written. Love your poems they always scream out to me
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Re: On a quest to find love...
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by Kie on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:16:03 PM AEST
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You have a flair for penning secretive emotional feelings that are often hidden or we are in denial.
Its like you see that mirror inside and your pen interprets it to us.
Now imagine if a man said today, "I am going to make you my quest for life".
Now i'm feeling all romantic!
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Re: On a quest to find love...
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:40:24 PM AEST
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LOVE SEEMS SAFE WHERE DREAMS DO LAY,UNTIL A BEAM OF BETRAY THAT SCREAMS AT US UNTIL WE PLAY,WE LOOK EVERY WHERE & ALL AROUND,INTO EMPTINESS WE STARE WITHOUT A SOUND,
WE SEEK NO GREED JUST A TOUCH,TO FOEVER FILL OUR NEEDS FOR A LITTLE LOVE,SO WE BARE ALL THESE STUPID RULES,JUST SO WE CARE ABOUT NOTHING OF A FOOL! GREAT POEM WITH LOTS OF LOVE OF A GLODEN HEART!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!
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