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Stupid Boy Again
Contributed by
rcav8ing
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Which tool is it to break the brick?
A hammer, a chisel the mortar’s too thick
Questions and comments to show that he cares
Get nothing in return except for cold stares
He has tried and tried to find the wedge
To pry on a corner to get the edge
Her graffiti is written with heartache and pain
It could come clean with a fresh summer rain
The wall is seamless not even a crack
Stupid boy keeps trying; he’s going to come back
He’s gone to the shed to find the right tool
He’ll try again but not play the fool
They say that absence makes a heart grow fond
Stupid boy is just thinking out back by the pond
There must be a key to the wall of stone
It’s hidden deep and it’s all her own
If she’d put out the torch and open the wall
Stupid boy could come in but not slip and fall
Stupid boy is confident predictably true
He is sure of himself and persistent too
With patience compared to that of a rock
He sits and he listens to every tick of the clock
Does his patience run thin with every swing of the pick?
Or will she give in and give the key to the brick?
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Re: Stupid Boy Again
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by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 01:35:29 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading this...great flow, and imagery. Tanya |
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Re: Stupid Boy Again
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 07:57:36 AM AEST
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| very strong writing. excellent flow and structure. keep it up. |
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Re: Stupid Boy Again
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 04:54:17 PM AEST
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I love the anology used here...
With patience and persistence he's sure to win....
Jenni |
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