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This Day Is Great
Contributed by
freckle
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:14:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This Day Is Great
Bright dawned the day
The sky so blue
The breeze caressed
Whispers of you
I go about my mundane tasks
A bounce in my step
So why, they ask
I tell them that
You love me true
And how tonight
I'll dine with you
We'll share a meal
Then share our love
In your arms
With the stars above
Yes I tell them
This day is great
For I have you
My true soul mate.
Carol 4/6/05
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freckle
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2005-04-06 23:14:25]
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Re: This Day Is Great
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:13:16 AM AEST
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"The breeze carressed
Whispers of you"
nice stuff, Carol.
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Re: This Day Is Great
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:34:04 AM AEST
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Echoes Mothy ... I adore that line ~
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: This Day Is Great
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by pixie on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 01:57:46 PM AEST
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beautifully written. my fave lines were
The breeze caressed
Whispers of you
they were so lovely :)
pix xx
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Re: This Day Is Great
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:06:30 PM AEST
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Carol, this was just utterly brilliant, cool poem Chica.
Bright dawned the day
The sky so blue
The breeze caressed
Whispers of you
I love this line it has so much meaning into it it just speaks volumes. loves it.
Jane |
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