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Double Take
Contributed by
freckle
on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:08:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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My friend you sit and read my words
Enjoying
rhyme
and flow
They tell of my life's adventures
Or so
you think
you know
I've travelled and I've laughed and cried
Enjoyed the sun
and
watched
love
die
I like rainbows and kittens too
At least,
these words
I've shared
with you
But......
what if it was just
a
farce
An
illusion
and
a fake
Would you
still be
my fan
Or would
your leave,
you take?
Carol 4/6/05
Copyright ©
freckle
... [
2005-04-06 23:08:58]
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Re: Double Take
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:11:40 PM AEST
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boy r u on the money with this one . . .
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Re: Double Take
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:10:26 AM AEST
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boy are you on the money with this one.
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Re: Double Take
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:31:26 AM AEST
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I would stay and read Carol. I will be a fan, be it kittens or rainbows, or rainbow colored kittens. I like your style and the way you too experiment with form and write with unpredictability. Well done here, as I've come to rely upon you to do.
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