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Perfect Girl
Contributed by
brokengirl
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:32:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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She’s just the perfect girl
With such a perfect life.
She’s athletic and smart
What could possibly go wrong in her life?
She has so many friends
She is nothing but smiles.
She can play basketball and volleyball
And in track she can run for miles.
“It’s so unfair” I say
“She must have a ‘lucky charm’
Her family is great too
Hey, whys that wristband on her arm?
I wish I had her life
Then everything would be perfect.
I would be happy, just like her.
My life wouldn’t be so wrecked.
How come she’s not at school today?
The teachers say she’s in the hospital.
She slit her wrists to kill herself,
Maybe her life isn’t so perfect after all.
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brokengirl
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Re: Perfect Girl
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by bigtig6269 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:55:38 PM AEST
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| don't you just love it when people judge a book by its cover? great poem, but keep your spirits up. I believe you can do whatever you want to |
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Re: Perfect Girl
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 12:34:54 AM AEST
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| Great write...It's true, we may think someone has it all until we walk in his or her shoes. |
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Re: Perfect Girl
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 07:59:42 AM AEST
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| wow, that was very dramatic and powerful. I've met a person like that, and that's how it was. Great write, and keep it up. |
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Re: Perfect Girl
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:17:40 AM AEST
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| So much this happens but we never see the pain behind it! Great write! Christina |
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Re: Perfect Girl
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by blue_angel on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:55:28 AM AEST
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| i have to say that this is how people think of me as well. they think im so perfect, yet im really just the opposite of their assumptions. not only this but because they think so much of me i am expected to do so many things... its a problem many poeple have, judging others and such. i mean, its only human to be hypocritical but it is really unfair to those who are not what you make them up to be. i seem to be happy yet my fake smiles only lead to real tears... and more cutting. and wow sorry for the long comment wow you got me to monologue. well great write i love this poem 5 stars! |
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Re: Perfect Girl
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 12:21:33 PM AEST
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strong message, but there is no such thing as perfect, just people who have to good and then loose it.
good write
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Re: Perfect Girl
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by pixie on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 01:58:47 PM AEST
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such a brilliant write. So ture are your words. people who sem to not have acare in the world, sometimes are the ones who have the most emotional struggles
pix xx |
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Re: Perfect Girl
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:24:25 AM AEST
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Ow! This one hurt to read. I'm sorry. I wish I knew what you felt, so I'd know the words to say. To many times we judge on what the outside says, when the real person cries within.
Take care...
David |
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