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Implosion
Contributed by
waos
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:30:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I wonder if your memory is more than truth,
if my vulnerability was my own fault,
if love and romance grow in the remembrance.
Your memory dies inside me slowly,
drawing deeper, drawing pieces of me along.
All I gave to you has dimmed,
love and hope have wept together in their grave.
Here I am. Left behind
by those who swore to never leave.
Times change and people change
and voices fade away.
My mind screams out,
inquiring how love can grow anew…
when all that was here, was given to you.
Copyright ©
waos
... [
2005-04-06 22:30:32]
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Re: Implosion
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:43:24 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem questioning of love and
one's self, a nice peice of writting . . .
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Re: Implosion
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 01:56:15 AM AEST
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A bit sad but great writing.
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Re: Implosion
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:16:09 AM AEST
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Strong finish with impact on this.
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Re: Implosion
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:07:30 PM AEST
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A intriguing intellectual poem.
Methinks there is the possibility to break out from that fixity.
Great write!
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Re: Implosion
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by Overstated on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 01:01:44 PM AEST
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oh wow this is dark and ultra sad - a truely beautiful piece with lines of brillance such as 'Your memory dies inside me slowly,
drawing deeper, drawing pieces of me along.
All I gave to you has dimmed,
love and hope have wept together in their grave.' truely exceptional stuff
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Re: Implosion
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:38:20 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem Kara filled with longing and
ache. The emotions in this poem were well
expressed. I loved it, but I am at a loss as to
what to say beyond what I already have.
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