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My Eyes are Watching
Contributed by
ruthie1983
on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:22:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I am like a shadow following a person,
Following the footprint of myself,
I see things happening around me,
But I can only open my eyes and watch,
I want to speak, but i seal my mouth shut,
My eyes are watching everyone moving,
Watching people struggling for life,
Other people partying and screaming,
I wonder what’s going to happen next,
Someone wants to speak up,
Someone wants to live better,
Struggling for breath,
Struggling for more air,
I move closer to help, but I am struggling myself,
I decide to stay hidden,
Letting my eyes only watch.
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ruthie1983
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2005-04-06 22:22:51]
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Re: My Eyes are Watching
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:18:36 PM AEST
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A very good, true write. I too am a people watcher.
We all struggle at times.
Keep up the great writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Eyes are Watching
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by poetryISlovex3 on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 06:58:34 PM AEST
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| I really relate to your poem. |
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