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This is not Good-Bye
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:04:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'll love you always
No matter how many miles
Because love is not somthing I just say
It's a feeling inside that causes me to smile
No matter what together we always are
I'm in your heart and you are in mine
It does'nt matter how far
I'll be by your side again in time
You are my love
You are my life
You are my angel from above
As well as my dreams at night
Baby, It wont be long
So please don't cry
Our love is not gone
And this is not goodbye
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-04-06 22:04:52]
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Re: This is not Good-Bye
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:08:42 PM AEST
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| well written. Pretty too...sad but pretty. |
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Re: This is not Good-Bye
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:12:33 PM AEST
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| Wow... Right now I feel excatly the same way. Great poem, I really enjoyed it! |
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Re: This is not Good-Bye
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:17:10 PM AEST
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| clark, you write amazing poetry, but if you keep on with saying that your poems suck, then i must say, why write poems that are not to your caliber? you write a poem until you think it is perfect, even emotionally, and when it is perfect no one can say it sucks, not even you. i strive for that every time now. i can say that i do not like the poem, but i cannot say it is horrible. this was an excellent poem, you might be frustrated that it isnt as good as you wanted, but it can be as good as you wanted. goodbyes, such painful things, but necessary in life sometimes. and thats just philosophy, not backhanded. |
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Re: This is not Good-Bye
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 12:03:59 AM AEST
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A beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: This is not Good-Bye
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 03:50:43 AM AEST
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Wow i love this, truly!
Short and simple, yet filled with feelings and emotion... beautiful!
Write on!
~Kt |
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