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cursed
Contributed by
blue_angel
on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:48:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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All that was holding onto me
Suddenly let go
The ocean waves wash away
Everything I know
And I feel that inside
I知 dying way too slow
The pain eats at my flesh
From the inside out
The pulsing deep inside my head
I want to scream and shout
I know I have nothing left
And here I stand in doubt
But I cut till I bleed
And I love till it hurts
I hope it値l get better
Yet know it値l get worse
And there is no way out of it
This deadly, poisonous curse
Let you send me an angel
To help me rest in peace
Let me finally close my eyes
And drift off into sleep
Maybe she could take my hand
And my maker I would meet
Unsuspected death
It fools us every time
And with each life taken away
Soon it will be mine
But I promise you, not yet
For now I wait in line
All these things I speak
Are painful to even say
These memories I ponder
Haunt me everyday
And no matter how hard I try
The consequences don稚 go away
I hold my head in my hands
With warm tears running down
All the emotion knotted up inside
I have to let it out
And I will never escape
This misery I have found
Darkness surrounds me
The black covers my eyes
I want to scream out in vain
Yet it痴 pointless to even try
And nothing is clear to me
I have to wonder why
Bottled up inside of me
Is a story too long to tell
And I know I cannot hide it
You know me all too well
I知 sorry I was so insecure
I知 sorry I finally fell
So I say good-bye to this life
And begin yet another
I can only hope this time
My heart doth not smother
And I plead that I myself
I do not have to cover
Copyright ﾂｩ
blue_angel
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2005-04-06 21:48:55]
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Re: cursed
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 12:42:39 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written. The title fits it greatly.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: cursed
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by girltranscended on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:21:18 PM AEST
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"All that was holding onto me
Suddenly let go"
The start is great! Those two lines make me want to go and write my own poem to follow them! he he
"But I cut till I bleed
And I love till it hurts
I hope it値l get better
Yet know it値l get worse" These lines rock!
And this ending!!!!
"So I say good-bye to this life
And begin yet another
I can only hope this time
My heart doth not smother
And I plead that I myself
I do not have to cover"
The whole doth not smother worked for me, brought a smile to my face, yes, but i wondered if I myself do not have THE cover.
*takes your hand when your eyes are closed and leads you to the mirror
:)
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Re: cursed
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 11:43:55 AM AEST
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| this was beautiful... |
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