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VAMPIRE
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:46:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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VAMPIRE…
Night stalker…
Beautiful, pallid illusion…
Monster within…
I’m the incubus within your dreams,
The shadow that follows your every move,
The cause of your pain-filled screams…
Fall helpless to my bloody kisses,
Let me spread my disease,
Fulfill all my morbid wishes…
Take my hand,
Embrace my malevolent world,
Obey my every command…
Lick my heels to please me,
Maybe I will loosen your chains,
Lies… you’ll never be free…
Flee the harsh light of day,
Succumb to the dark melody of night,
Forever here to stay…
This is no dream,
But a horrid nightmare you can’t wake up from,
Let me here you scream…
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-04-06 21:46:56]
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Re: VAMPIRE
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by Keila on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:12:02 PM AEST
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| mmm... tasty |
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Re: VAMPIRE
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:00:05 PM AEST
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Divinity in the macarbre ahhhh, zee nothing
like it no? a true masterpeice of poetry . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: VAMPIRE
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by pixie on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 02:00:19 PM AEST
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a wonderful vampire write, loved it!!
pix xx |
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Re: VAMPIRE
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:26:33 PM AEST
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I like to see you mixing it up with a bit of rhyme. Well done Stephy, I like that one too.
Nazzy ~
( "Let me here you scream…" I dunno if here was intentional ... or if hear was supposed to be used ... but it works either way and I think looking at it ... I like it the way it is )
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Re: VAMPIRE
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:10:34 PM AEST
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| this is good. it reminds my of another auther on this site.. who swears that you are better then him... His Blood flower stories i love. i am a vamp nut so. i really like reading stuff like this.. i like it |
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Re: VAMPIRE
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by Queentzie on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 03:06:38 PM AEST
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nice...
kinda scary |
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