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Yearning
Contributed by
freckle
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:30:57 PM in AEST
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Yearning
You are always on my mind
Each day, I wait, anticipating
Another day of love
Red lipstick and a smile
Never a frown for you
I wish you knew, how often
Needing you, I've prepared
Giving you my all, in my yearning for you.
Carol 4/6/05
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2005-04-06 21:30:57]
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Re: Yearning
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:59:27 PM AEST
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Cool. I kinda like that.
Hm.
Never really thought of doing an acrostic outside of classes that make you (seriously, I think every class ever makes you do that at some point in time)
Hm.
Cool beans. Bravo.
Lots of love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: Yearning
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:08:22 PM AEST
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| very nice write carol . . . |
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Re: Yearning
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by rcav8ing on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:27:19 PM AEST
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| Sweet. I'm someone is very lucky. |
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Re: Yearning
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by rcav8ing on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:30:09 PM AEST
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| oops! That didn't come out right. It was supposed to read - I'm sure that someone is very lucky. |
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