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I Hate You
Contributed by
white_tiger
on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:04:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You never cared to listen or never cared to call
You never thought about me when you soul started to fall,
I was standing right behind you, but you didn't turn around
You were talking in a whisper, but I was screaming out loud.
Best friends we had been since I can remember
Through the ups and downs we were always together
You proved to me that you were the best friend I'd need
But now, I feel like a flower thats drooped to a seed.
I don't understand what the hell I did wrong?
We were always full of life, always bursting into song,
But now, we never look at each other; just walk by
I don't know how you feel, but I feel as if I want to die.
If you ever feel the urge to want to come back to me
Just take a look at my face, and there you'll be able to see
A whole new person, my heart no longer has any severs
I'm fine on my own, I don't need you; not now, not never.
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2005-04-06 21:04:43]
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Re: I Hate You
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:09:28 PM AEST
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| Wow. This is just like me and my exboyfriend. He was an okay friend but now....we just stopped talking. I like your poem. Stay strong, Dude. If you need a good friend, I am a good listener. |
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Re: I Hate You
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by babygal on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:24:56 AM AEST
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| i think your peom was really good right now it sounds like me and my bf |
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