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The Reason
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:34:51 PM in AEST
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Society wants me dead,but the streets keep me breathing,regardless how you feel about me,get use to it,cause I'm not leaving
They aim for my heart,cause I bring the darkness to their light,I'm the knowledge from the streets invading their ingorance,I bet they thought I wouldn't ever be so bright.
Keep closing your eyes,but you won't ever escape what I bring to the table,I left the hood and I brought the truth with me,so yes,I'm willing and very able.
I know how you feel about me,so just cut the ******** and give me your best shot,its gonna take thunderbolts from the heavens above to make this soldier drop.
You turned your back on me,just because I came from the slums,but you can't no longer silence me,how can you silence the bullet from the gun?
Don't get me twisted,I aint talking about killing you,please your not even on my level,you still think your high and mighty,but you know you can't live without the devil.
Sooner or later my poems will be put into a book,then what are you gonna do,after my knowledge gets you hooked?
Most of the great scholars were killed before they even had a chance to live their vison of peace,so it wouldn't surprise me if they tired to bring my voice to a halt,nah but they can't seize,at least not me.
If it wasn't for the streets,I wouldn't of been speaking these words,and if you believe that I will criticize you,like you do me,well thats just absurd.
I open the eyes of those who seem to be blind,I bring the harshness of reality to them,but trust me,I'm only being kind.
Society does want me dead,but the streets,the streets keep me breathing,so **** what they think,get use to it,cause I ain't leaving.
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THUGGIN4REAL
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2005-04-06 20:34:51]
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Re: The Reason
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:57:38 PM AEST
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A thought provoking piece you have here. Very interesting and so captivating. I loved the flow it's written with immense darkness.
a very good write. well done
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Re: The Reason
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:11:56 PM AEST
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| good write i neva been on the streets tho mustve been hell |
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Re: The Reason
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by Angelic_Demon on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:49:28 PM AEST
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It's good. I like it. Has a realistic and sober tone to it... :D
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Re: The Reason
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by Onslaught on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 03:26:45 PM AEST
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Very good, very impressive.
People fear reality. They will do whatever it takes to hide from it. That is why people can treat you with aggression if you speak the truth.
I liked this a lot. We are too few and far between. |
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Re: The Reason
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 03:36:09 PM AEST
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i love the subject here, very interesting and quite original - fact or fiction, it matters not.
however i got the feeling that you were pushing to make it rhyme, instead of focusing on your message. i don't know, but for me that seemed to take a little of it's potential away.
in all, i really like it, and there are many lines in here that i just went 'wow' to, lol.
keep it up :)
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Re: The Reason
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by sick_n_twisted on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:29:35 PM AEST
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| nice poem same here i've never been on the streets but it must be hell nice write very honest |
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Re: The Reason
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:39:59 PM AEST
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| This is niffty. The idea behind is great, truelly. Know how you feel, though...nice job. |
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Re: The Reason
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by TheSpiritx on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:44:27 PM AEST
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Good stuff. My favorite types of poems come from personal experience. Whether they deviate into a fantasy world after that or whether they remain in something more substantial and mundane, the reality of life is still a great base for poetry.
Your personal experiences are things limited only to you, but sharing them effectively with others is what has been accomplished here. |
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Re: The Reason
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by ScreenSaver77 on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 04:00:50 PM AEST
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Nicely done, you remind me of another poet I know coming from the streets. It is well written, it's honest and real . Life aint easy, and you're poem proves it!
Regards |
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Re: The Reason
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:42:48 PM AEST
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| Hey homey, I am sorry it took me so long to read your poem, I have been writing them like crazy. Any way man this poem was killenit man I really liked it. Peace. SLipSiX. |
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Re: The Reason
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by Kay-Kay on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 03:20:36 PM AEST
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HEY GREAT POEM, THIS IS REALLY REALLY GOOD. I CAN REALLY FEEL THE TIME PUT INTO THIS WORK ALL OF YOUR POETRY AMAZES ME SO MUCH. I LOVE YOUR STYLE, IT'S GREAT. KEEP IT UP
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Re: The Reason
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by jmpy84 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:47:55 PM AEST
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| intersting write but it is very good keep it up |
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