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You Saw It...

Contributed by Poetically-Inclined on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 06:55:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

YOU SAW WHAT HAPPENED TO HER BUT YOU DIDN'T CARE,
YOU HAD TO SEE IT; I MEAN YOU WERE RIGHT THERE,
AS HER SOUL DWINDLED TO THE SIZE OF A GRAIN OF SAND.
WHEN SHE FELL WHY DIDN'T YOU HELP HER STAND?
AS THEY BUTCHERED AND TORTURTED AND MURDERED HER SOUL,
HOW DARE YOU TRY TO EXCUSE YOURSELF BY SAYING THAT OVER THE SITUATION YOU HAD NO CONTROLE,
YOU SAT THERE AND WATCHED AS THE POISONOUS SEED OF HATE RAN THROUGH HER VEINS,
AND WATCHED HER DIE OFF SLOWLY BECAUSE HER HEART COULDN'T BE SUSTAINED.
YOU HEARD HER CRY THROUGH THE VIGOUROUS WALLS OF PAIN, HURT AND HELL,
WITH NO INTENT TO CATCH HER YOU WATCHED HER AS SHE JUST FELL.
WHAT WAS ONCE THE MOON, THE SUN, AND ALL THE STARS,
DISAPPEARED LIKE THE LIFE EXISTING ON MARS.
BUT I DON'T WANT YOU TO FEEL BAD BECAUSE THERE WERE OTHERS WITH YOU,
WHO STOOD THERE AND WATCHED TOO.
AS THE BLOOD AND TEARS OF THE PAIN STORED INSIDE FOR SOO MANY YEARS WAS FINALLY RELEASED,
OH SO I GUESS YALL EYES MUST HAVE REALLY HAD A FEAST.
AS THIS ONCE BEAUTIFUL CREATURE TURNED TO STONE,
THE CAUSE OF THIS TRANSGRESSION IS THSAT OF YOUR OWN...

Copyright © Poetically-Inclined ... [ 2005-04-06 18:55:11]
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Re: You Saw It... (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 09:03:05 AM AEST
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nice but the caps are too much

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