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Faded Colors
Contributed by
thepumpkinking
on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 06:05:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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"Faded Colors"
Who'd have thought I'd feel like this?
To be full of nothing and lonliness
To feel it run so deep through me
Wonder should I drink this hemlock tea?
Could it fix all of the flaws
with a simple sip straight through the straw?
There was a time when I was fine
and felt alright inside my mind
But now I cannot sleep at night
Too busy having my self-fight
And being totally ensnared
by all of my haunting nightmares
Who'd have thought I'd get this far
only to watch myself fall apart?
I noticed it, but then ignored
And so my world's gray just like before
Couldn't sieze just what I saw,
can anybody hear my silent call?
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thepumpkinking
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2005-04-06 18:05:42]
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Re: Faded Colors
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 07:31:29 PM AEST
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hun i know how many times people have said "I've been there" but i trully have. I reached my peak and fell. I lost myself badly because i messed with my head...its complicated but im still lost but im not in the state i was when i hit that peak or anytime before it...just set your mind to how you want to feel...its complicated lol but it can be done...
please comment on my work too
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Re: Faded Colors
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:08:26 PM AEST
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Good write I had flashes of the same thoughts feelings and uncertainity. Keep a stiff upper lip things well sort em selves out .
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