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Ocean Philosophy.
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FleurdeSang
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:27:39 PM in AEST
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Languishing on miles of Time,
Warm sand between my searching toes,
I glance at the sapphire masterpiece before me,
And wonder where the horizon line ends…
Merciless waves torrenting over a brave soul,
Weary, yet determined,
He swims forward,
Everlasting strength in this ocean of life…
I hear the call of the seagull above me,
“Come, dear friend, and fly…”
Kissed by the Day Ruler,
A crown of sunrise around my head,
I feel her comforting embrace,
She welcomes me to her endless cerulean solitude…
My heart spreads its wings,
I break away my chains,
The winds of change sift through my feathers,
And I’m soaring…
I
Am
Free…
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Re: Ocean Philosophy.
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:39:47 PM AEST
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Free ... most definately ... but I can see in your words ... you have always known how to fly.
Nazzy ~
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Re: Ocean Philosophy.
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by zenmind on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:16:15 PM AEST
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This poem reminded me of an eye of a hurricane....peaceful, yet only a break between the devestation. I'm happy that you can find moments like these, moments where you can feel free. I really identify with the feeling of looking out over the ocean, and feeling blown away by how it seemingly goes on infinitely.....it's a perfect metaphore for life.....
I loved the first stanza.
Languishing on miles of Time,
Warm sand between my searching toes,
I glance at the sapphire masterpiece before me,
And wonder where the horizon line ends…
I loved it because you perfectly encapsulated one single moment, in words, which really expresses something that is beyond words. I love the "stillness" and the "awe" or "wonder" that this evokes. To me, that feeling is freedom.
Be True,
zenmind |
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Re: Ocean Philosophy.
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by doug on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 06:08:07 PM AEST
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I've read through some of your other poems and liked every one but it is this one that gave me a shiver inside. I feel that shiver only when something hits me deeply and I love the poems which do.
she welcomes me to her endless cerulean solitude...
and ..... I Am Free
You have inspired me with these words.
hope to read more soon. truly , doug |
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