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Is It Worth It?
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Is it worth,
The tears and pain?
Is it worth,
The depression and shame?
Slowly the hours creep by,
They slowly fade to years.
The pain sinks in deeper,
I can feel my end as it nears.
Is it worth,
The aching heartbreak?
Is it worth,
The insanity for God's sake?
Ive never felt so alone,
Like I didnt belong.
Everything I do and say,
Seems to be so wrong.
Is it worth,
Wrists with scars?
Is it worth,
Bloody battles and endless wars?
My heart is empty,
My soul is famished.
It seems to be,
That my soul has vanished.
Is it worth,
These words of shame?
Is it worth,
In the form of a poem...even more pain?
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Pats4eva7
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Re: Is It Worth It?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Unbreakable on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:33:47 PM AEST (User
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Your poem is very powerful. Poetry is always enhanced when you write first hand about something that you're experiencing. To answer your last question, in my opinion it is worth it to a write about about how you feel, to learn that there are people who are going through the same thing as you, people who can relate to you. I'm sorry for the way that you feel, but you are definitely a talented writer, keep it up!
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Re: Is It Worth It?
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:37:21 PM AEST (User
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*sigh* Sheesh..I can relate to this a lot at this moment in time.
These questions have been on my mind, recently.
Great write, it's nice to see,
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Re: Is It Worth It?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ThePumpkinKing on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 06:01:48 PM AEST (User
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can definately relate to this, right now especially...awesome poem, very poweful |
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Re: Is It Worth It?
(User Rating: 1 ) by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 07:41:04 PM AEST (User
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very strong emotions and great structure. No words can explain it... it's just put together so darn well. Keep it up, and hope to see more great writing. |
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