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Break Up 2 Make Up
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 01:46:53 PM in AEST
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Tonight is the night I call it quits,I love you with all my heart,so much that I cannot no longer put you through this.
How could something so simple come between our love,it must of been predestained,because I can't get no answers from the heavens above.
I've never felt so alive when I held you in my arms,who would of thought by me opening up,would cause me so much harm.
Yeah we had our disagreements,but you tell me,didn't we always find a way to work things out,I never once questioned your love,not once was there ever a doubt.
Thank you for your beautiful smiles,and I'm sorry babe for drawing out nothing but your tears,losing you forever is something that came as a surprise to me,a fear.
Why have you continued to love this monster,have I not told you of my past,I'm always at battle with myself,cause this is a war that will forever last.
I know my words dont come off as they seem,but the truth is,I won't leave you,cause when I'm you,my heart doesn't bleed.
How can we both be so strong,but yet we don't have the strength to walk away,I guess thats when,"we live to fight another day,"comes into play.
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Re: Break Up 2 Make Up
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by mine_24 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:36:37 PM AEST
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Where were you back in the day??? Your words hit my heart in ways that I never again thought were possible. Keep it up Greg. I knew you could do it!
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Re: Break Up 2 Make Up
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:56:15 PM AEST
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I like this.
It's lovely. It's nice to see someone who knows that fights are to be had, but they are not all bad.
The only problem with this, is maybe you need some more line breeaks.
Great write,
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Re: Break Up 2 Make Up
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 05:35:49 PM AEST
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Yeah, I agree about the line breaks. I do think that this is a good write. My husband and I argue but we end up laughing at ourselves a lot; especially when we realize it's something really stupid that we got upset over to begin with....keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!
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