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Love??
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:46:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I sweat from the heat but chills run up my spine,
Cooled from within, Iced hearts are never fine.
Love melts ice but releases pain,
How do you win in this horrid game?
So innocent, so vulnerable, so ready to lose
How can you be so blind
You think your living large,
but true love is hard to find.
Kate Ecklund
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2005-04-06 12:46:45]
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Re: Love??
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by sick_n_twisted on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:52:22 PM AEST
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| great write.loved it true love is hard to find but it will come to you if you dont find it dont worry.great write.later' Denise |
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Re: Love??
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by breny on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 06:40:22 PM AEST
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this poem says so much and yet it's not that long...2 of my favorite things about a poem.
"but true love is hard to find."
And I couldn't agree with you more :-D
~Brenna~
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Re: Love??
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by sride686 on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:29:25 PM AEST
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| It took few words to make this poem powerful and I enjoyed reading it. love does feel like a game when you can't find your love. keep writing I want to read more of your work.....Steve |
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