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Last Breath
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:32:05 AM in AEST
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Concealed in my misery
Awakening to such pain
Clouding in my eyes
The tears run down my face
I try to run away
Yet I have no where to go
Save me from myself
Before I lose control
Held captive by my sorrow
Keep me from this death
And I will say good-bye
With my final breath
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2005-04-06 11:32:05]
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Re: Last Breath
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by mishy on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:34:48 AM AEST
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| wow. i like it! :D |
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Re: Last Breath
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by Arsenic on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:22:37 PM AEST
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Nice, but I didn't get the last three lines... keep me from this death.... Well, if that is the case, why do you expect a final breath? All in all, well done.
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Re: Last Breath
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:52:30 PM AEST
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| Beautiful x |
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