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Memories
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:16:42 AM in AEST
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As softly as a whisper, borne upon the breeze.
As sweetly as a kiss, from a lover's loving lips.
As gently as a touch, aflamed by passion's lust.
As lovely as it is, to feel what love invests.
To dimly remember, the tales of yesterdays.
To dearly discover, the feel of love's embrace.
To verily forever, lose a part of you.
To luckily recover, the smiles long lost to youth.
Memories of old, that lives on in tides.
Friendships of past, the lives that I have touched.
Loves and lovers lost, those who touched my heart.
Peoples I have met, the world that gave me much.
Upon these fecund fields, a seed did sprout.
upon those lovely years, a tale throughout.
Upon this veil of time, embroided by constellations.
Upon the stretch of years, remembered and forgotten.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2005-04-06 11:16:42]
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Re: Memories
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by babyboo8 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:44:18 AM AEST
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very deep and meaningful,great write
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Re: Memories
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by hooray_its_jen on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:54:50 AM AEST
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wow....great write, very heart felt and....deep. I know a lot of people would find it very meaningful, as I did.
I'm thinking of posting it in the "Best poem of the day" forum, if I can find that one even more.
Five stars, definitely.
Love, Jenna |
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Re: Memories
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by mishy on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 11:56:15 AM AEST
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| wow. i could feel it! so real! keep it up! |
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Re: Memories
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:15:45 PM AEST
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I can picture you sitting there with those memories . very vivid most enjoyable to read good to see you posting again my friend
Michelle |
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Re: Memories
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:14:06 PM AEST
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Wow!! This is so beautiful..and it touched me deeply because I am always looking out that window....not with regret but with a smile...
Thanks for sharing this masterpiece..
Jenni |
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Re: Memories
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by Kie on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 01:46:01 PM AEST
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As I read this I thought of the way a piano almost trickles softly blending one sound into another. Its delicate and nostalgic, remembered and forgotten.
This is an incredibly beautiful poem.
Incredibly.
Kie |
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