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Paradox of confusions
Contributed by
Sonic_phoenix
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:45:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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end the world
then start it over
remove the burden
from atlis's shoulders
in the end we were friends
an instant begining
an instant end
no time to mend
love to hate me
hate to love you
broken and scattered
was any of it true
confusion on intuition
betrayl can it trust
showing a light
when all should be done
great noise
such a quiet place
lies are told
straight to my face
innocent faith
cruel intentions
annihilation
without reason
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Re: Paradox of confusions
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:53:57 AM AEST
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A perplexing piece...
Conflicting yet somewhat rational.
There is much beauty and truth with contrast, something you have captured rather well within this piece.
You have certainly raised some interesting contradictions!
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Re: Paradox of confusions
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:43:11 PM AEST
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good write its very true on some key points g2g bye
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