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SHOULD I SHINE?

Contributed by teinos on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:34:51 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Should I Shine?


should i shine
wen life is a struggle
should i shine
wen im low
should i shine
or should i let it go?

i hope u understand
dis niggah been killing niggahs
he want stop till he hurt er
this murderer wont stop till he b murdered
thugs be crazin
put that ***** down u b raizin
and put dat blunt out u be blazen
niggah u jus be faizen
frontin to all those
hu cant see thru u
dumb *** niggah
u aint a niggah i be needin
id rather put a bullet thru u
so u b bleedin
u be on the front of a magazine
that ur mama wont even be readin

u put gurls down
wen u cant get none
thinkin u a pimp
thinkin u gon get done
wen the playa get played
he be in a rage
u should act ur age
instead of crying to ur mama
she dnt want ur drama
its called *****in karma
even tho she be there for u
u still harm er

should i shine
wen life is a struggle
should i shine
wen im low
should i shine
or should i let it go

i aint gone let it go
imma keep rollen
wit my baby daddy and the pram he be strollen
im the only be he be holdin
wen its cold n
no one to hold
he be telling me to look at the stars
he be there
except for all the other dumb***
baby daddys hu b behind bars
my boo he be driving the minta cars

should i shine (imma shine)
wen life is a struggle (aint no struggle)
should i shine (i shine)
wen im low (i aint low)
should i shine (imma shine)
or should i let it go (dun let it go)

imma shine
i aint got no struggle
i shine
cause i aint low
imma shine
but imma let this ***** go

to all those niggahs
not wearin rubbers
with baby mothers
u can get *****
if u cant stand
and be a man
hu da whore
gun get sum lil kiddies knockin on there door
stop killin
use rubbers
be smart
earn them dollars for dem mean whip cars
...insted of a homo ass niggah gettin raped behind bars...



diss be a poem from ma gurl freedom she wrote diss in a book b4 she committed suicide so yeh she was a gurl without a baby daddy and she got pregnant and her baby is now 2 yrs old named jacquia holla for my gurl its the only lyrics i could understand. please leave a message dun curr if ya dun like it can ya juss place a rate and imma holla.




Copyright © teinos ... [ 2005-04-06 04:34:51]
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Re: SHOULD I SHINE? (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:23:31 AM AEST
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Great write! : )
I especially loved these lines:

should i shine (imma shine)
wen life is a struggle (aint no struggle)
should i shine (i shine)

Love, Jenna


Re: SHOULD I SHINE? (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:24:33 PM AEST
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wow i have often wonder what a rap piece would look like on paper. The spelling alone is amazing and when you read it ya cant help but git a accent eh.
Nice write Bro :-)

Peace
Whisper




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