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Contributed by
sweetncaring
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Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 11:29:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I want to scream and shout
say let me go
I am not as little
as I used to be
why do I feel as
if you treat me
like I'm three
but I'm really sixteen
and wishing I was more free
why is it that I'm so confused
why do I have to say it over and over again
let me be
let me be free
free is not a word that I know very well
because my parents love me to a point
that I'm very protected
so I will scream and shout
saying let me be
I just wanna be free
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Re: Free
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:08:39 AM AEST
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I can so much relate to ur situation for I was the same at ur age. I too thought that my parent's were over protective, but now as I am a parent I realised why my parent's did what they did. You too will realise this when u have children of ur own.
Otherwise a well written piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing it
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Re: Free
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:22:00 AM AEST
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It's called puberty. Hang tuff as you'll get thru and feel much less anger soon.
Good write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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