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Chrysalis Unfolding
Contributed by
sarahgordon
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Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 11:18:01 PM in AEST
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On a still night, she springs
From depths of grassy nebula.
She spreads her ripe plum wings,
And to the air, she softly sings.
Cradled gently in her leaves,
She feels this is the time to go.
The gift of life, she receives,
And to the night, a breath she breathes.
Copyright ©
sarahgordon
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2005-04-05 23:18:01]
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Re: Chrysalis Unfolding
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:12:09 AM AEST
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You captured alot in so little words. A beautifully written piece of poetry. A pleasant and enjoyable write. Well done
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Sue |
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Re: Chrysalis Unfolding
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by vox on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:42:50 PM AEST
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jeez, that was really amazing. i love it. i LOVE it! good job!
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Re: Chrysalis Unfolding
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 08:06:31 PM AEST
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beautiful
i believe you are a nice poet
keep up the good writes
-->Rae |
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Re: Chrysalis Unfolding
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:36:16 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful write. Ah the wonders of nature. Peace to you. Laura |
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