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Scape
Contributed by
sarahgordon
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:41:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Storm clouds waken and stir over the mountains,
slowly spreading their fury across the
sky.
They ascend, the fire of the evening
sun smothering its smoke into a blanket
over the blue.
Electricity crackles, and ripples through
the air to make the grass below stand
alert, on guard.
Snowy peaks pierce through the
cloud to reach heaven, and in
their shadow, the grassy knolls part
way for a thin stream that winds through
the rock to fall into
the still waters of the lagoon.
I drink
in this vision,
as I follow
my path to the water’s edge.
A few last ribbons of gossamer
sunlight stream through
the cloud
breaks.
The earth, air, water, and I
glory in the glow of the fading light.
Soon,
we know,
the storm will come.
But in the eye,
we are held
Divine.
Copyright ©
sarahgordon
... [
2005-04-05 22:41:07]
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Re: Scape
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:33:22 AM AEST
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This is an absolutely outstanding piece of poetry. So beautifully written and so descriptive. U have a natural talent in writing. Well done. i look forward to more of ur work.
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: Scape
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by vox on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:50:59 PM AEST
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| very well written, in my oppinion. magnificent |
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Re: Scape
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:17:45 AM AEST
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| I believe this is the second poem of yours I've found tonight. This was also done very well. I quite enjoyed it and could almost see the scene in my minds eye. Well done, Peace to you, Laura |
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