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Dance of the Damned
Contributed by
freckle
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Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:24:57 PM in AEST
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Dance of the Damned
The dancing of the damned
Void of life and mirth
Remind us that our time
Indeed, is short on Earth
For dancing we will do
For all eternity
Some a hellish dance
While others a heavenly
Two orchestras will play
For ever and all time
A ghoulish dance of misery
Against a dance divine
So choose ye now this day
Which dancing you will do
Decisions of the light or dark
Your partner waits for you.
Carol
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2005-04-05 22:24:57]
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Re: Dance of the Damned
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:57:16 AM AEST
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Carol this is a truly fantastic piece of poetry very well captured and portrayed. A really good write written so well. Well done
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Sue |
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Re: Dance of the Damned
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 06:09:24 AM AEST
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| Awesome..... such a beautiful poem. I truly loved it!!! |
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Re: Dance of the Damned
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 06:53:26 AM AEST
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Wow!
I like this too!!
So very well done and I just love the wrap up ! |
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Re: Dance of the Damned
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:37:06 AM AEST
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I missed ya postin this one ... I am glad I cam back to it though ... I got some catchin up on you to do ... huh ?
Nazzy ~
( thought this was a fabulous way to view the age old battle ) |
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